Chapter 9: The Business That Never Existed
The next morning, Margaret asked me to come to her office with Liam.
She had requested additional records from the lender and the commercial property seller.
When I arrived, she was standing beside a large screen displaying several business documents.
Liam sat beside me.
He hadn't slept.
“Before we begin,” Margaret said, “I want both of you to understand that we're dealing with financial representations that may extend beyond the original loan application.””
Liam nodded.
I folded my hands in my lap.
“Show us.””
Margaret opened a document.
It was a company registration for Powell Residential Ventures LLC.
“Your son and daughter-in-law are listed as the owners,” she explained.
“However, the business plan was prepared by a separate consulting company associated with Richard Collins.””
She displayed another document.
The company was called Collins Property Advisory.
I recognized the name from the bank statement.
“Is that Richard's company?””
“Yes. But there's a problem.””
Margaret enlarged the document.
“The company reported substantial prior experience managing commercial real estate. We contacted the businesses listed as previous clients.””
“And?””
“Two of them say they have never worked with Collins Property Advisory.””
Liam stared at the screen.
“What?””
“One company no longer exists. The other belongs to a person who says their business information was used without permission.””
I looked at my son.
“Did you verify any of this before investing?””
He shook his head.
“Richard said he had been doing this for years.””
Margaret opened another file.
“This is the commercial property purchase agreement.””
She highlighted a section.
“The seller confirms that the building was listed for sale, but the person negotiating the transaction was not Richard. It was a broker named Stephen Walsh.””
“Where is he now?”” Liam asked.
“That's unclear. He has not responded to the seller's requests for documentation.””
I leaned forward.
“Then what was Richard doing?””
“According to the preliminary records, he was acting as a financial intermediary. He collected money from several parties who believed they were contributing toward the same property transaction.””
Liam looked confused.
“Several parties?””
Margaret nodded.
“We have identified at least three separate payments associated with the proposed deal. The records do not yet establish that all the money came from the same source.””
I thought about the forty-two thousand dollars from my savings.
The fifteen thousand five hundred sent to Patricia.
The sixty-eight thousand scheduled for Richard.
“Could the money have been moved between accounts to make it look as though the business had more funds than it actually did?””
Margaret looked at me.
“That is one possibility investigators may need to examine.””
Liam stood abruptly.
“I need to call Richard.””
Margaret shook her head.
“Not yet.””
“He lied to me!””
“Liam, I understand you're angry. But you should not confront him or attempt to recover money independently. Preserve your communications and let the appropriate professionals handle the investigation.””
Liam sat back down.
He looked devastated.
“Mom, I thought I was building something for us.””
I turned toward him.
“You were building something on a foundation you never checked.””
He wiped his eyes.
“I know.””
Margaret closed the screen.
“There is one more issue. We obtained a copy of the transfer agreement involving Eleanor's home. The lender has confirmed that it was included in the supporting package.””
I felt my chest tighten.
“Does that mean my house is at risk?””
“Not automatically. The document does not establish a valid transfer of ownership, and we have already formally disputed the guarantee. But the lender needs to complete its review.””
“Can they take my house?””
Margaret looked directly at me.
“Based on what we have reviewed so far, there is no established legal basis for them to take your home. We will continue protecting your ownership rights.””
I exhaled.
For the first time in days, I felt my shoulders relax.
Then Margaret turned toward Liam.
“There's another document I need to show you.””
She placed a printed email on the desk.
The sender was Richard.
The recipient was a broker involved in the commercial transaction.
The subject line read:
*Family Property Security – Final Confirmation.*
Liam began reading.
His face changed with every sentence.
“What is it?”” I asked.
He handed it to me.
Richard had written that the family was prepared to provide additional security through two residential properties.
My house.
Patricia's house.
Then came a sentence that made me feel physically ill.
Both owners are older, and the family expects no objections once the inheritance arrangements are formally discussed.
I put the page down.
“He wrote that?””
Margaret nodded.
“The email was provided by the broker as part of the lender's internal review.””
Liam stared at the floor.
“He was planning to use both houses.””
“Yes.””
I looked at my son.
“Did you know he had included Patricia's house?””
“No.””
“Did you know he described me as someone who would eventually agree?””
He shook his head.
Margaret opened a final attachment.
It was a spreadsheet listing the expected funding sources for the business.
There were four entries.
The first was Liam's savings.
The second was the money transferred from my account.
The third was Patricia's property.
The fourth was a future inheritance from my estate.
I read the final line again.
It listed the estimated value of my house.
Then, beside it, someone had written:
Expected transfer within five years.
I pushed the paper away.
Five years.
Richard had apparently decided that my home could become part of his financial plan while I was still living in it.
Liam buried his face in his hands.
“Mom, I swear I didn't write that.””
“I believe you didn't write that particular line.””
He looked up.
“But you helped create the situation.””
He nodded.
“I know.””
Margaret gathered the documents.
“We need to contact the appropriate authorities regarding the suspected unauthorized use of identities and financial documents. Patricia should also obtain independent legal advice concerning her own property.””
I agreed.
Liam agreed.
But before we could leave, Margaret received an email.
She read it silently.
Then she looked at me.
“Eleanor, the commercial property seller has sent us another document.””
“What now?””
“It's a termination notice. The sale is being canceled because the required deposit was never completed.””
Liam stood.
“What does that mean for our money?””
Margaret looked at him.
“It means we need to establish exactly where every payment went and whether any portion can be recovered.””
I looked at my son.
“Your business is over?””
He nodded slowly.
“It looks that way.””
We left the office shortly before noon.
On the drive home, Liam barely spoke.
When we reached my house, he stopped beside the front steps.
“Mom, I need to tell you something.””
I turned toward him.
“What?””
He looked at the windows of the house.
“Richard called me last night.””
“What did he say?””
“He said if I cooperated with you and Margaret, he would make sure Harper lost everything.””
I stared at him.
“Did he threaten you?””
“He said he had documents proving Harper was involved in the transfers.””
“Was she?””
Liam looked down.
“She knew about the business. She knew about the money. But I don't think she knew about the forged guarantee.””
I took a slow breath.
“Then she needs to tell the truth.””
He nodded.
“I think she wants to.””
We entered the house.
My phone rang almost immediately.
Harper.
I answered.
“Hello?””
Her voice was trembling.
“Eleanor, I need to see you.””
“What's happened?””
“Dad came to our apartment this morning.””
I frowned.
“What did he want?””
“He took the business laptop. He said he was protecting us.””
My grip tightened around the phone.
“Did he take anything else?””
Harper began crying.
“Yes.””
“What?””
“My passport. My mother's notary journal. And a folder containing the original bank statements.””
I looked at Liam.
He had heard every word.
“Harper, where is your mother?””
“At home. She's terrified.””
“Did your father say where he was going?””
There was a long pause.
Then Harper whispered:
“He said he was going to speak to someone about making the whole problem disappear.””
My stomach tightened.
“Who?””
“I don't know. But before he left, he told me something.””
“What?””
Her voice broke.
“He said the bank wasn't the only organization investigating him.””
I stood frozen.
“What does that mean?””
Harper took a shaky breath.
Then she said:
“Eleanor, Dad has been doing this to other families for years. And he told me that if anyone finds out what happened to the money, they'll discover that Liam and I weren't his first victims.””
A moment later, another message arrived on my phone.
It was from Margaret.
Eleanor, please don't go anywhere with Richard or meet him alone. We've received information about another property owner who has filed a complaint.
I opened the attachment.
It was a photograph of an older woman standing outside a modest brick house.
Beneath it was her name.
And beside her name was an address I recognized.
It was the house where Richard and Patricia had lived before Harper's wedding.
The woman in the photograph was Richard's former business partner.
And according to the complaint, she had lost her home after signing a document she believed was only a temporary financial agreement.
I looked at Liam.
Then I whispered:
“Your father-in-law has done this before.””
My phone rang again.
This time, the caller ID showed Richard Collins.
I answered without saying a word.
His voice was calm.
Almost friendly.
“Eleanor, I think it's time we stopped involving lawyers. I have something that belongs to you.””
“What?””
He paused.
“David's original will.””
My blood ran cold.
“That's impossible. My attorney has the original.””
Richard gave a quiet laugh.
May you like
“Then perhaps you should ask your attorney why there's another one with a different set of instructions.””
And before I could respond, he ended the call.